Monday, July 20, 2009

A Writer's Perspective~Bud Connell

I’m pleased to have debut author, Bud Connell, as my guest Over Coffee. Bud is a fascinating man of many talents. He’s written a new contemporary thriller, Peak Experience.

Today, Bud discusses his perspective of the writing process. His thoughts on writers' block, conflict, characters, and recharging your writing. The satisfaction that comes from being able to create entire worlds that begins, continues and ends the way he wants them.



Thank you, Sia, for this forum. The gift of the Internet and the freedom to express and expound that it provides continues to amaze me. It’s a privilege that we must protect at all costs.

I’m new to fiction writing, but not new to writing. Over the years I’ve written an estimated one hundred thousand pages of business materials, television scripts, radio scripts, commercials and jingle lyrics. My background provided the discipline, attention-to-detail, wide interests, and perseverance necessary to become a fiction writer. After the morass of exteriorly directed clichéd bunkum, it’s a gift to create complete worlds populated by people of choice. Control... it’s all about control; and in the world of fiction, although my characters do what they do, and I follow, I have the on-off switch. If I don’t like the direction a story is taking, I can kill the power and start another world. I will elaborate in my forthcoming book, The Writing of a Debut Novel.

Writing, more specifically writing fiction is primarily a lifestyle decision driven by a desire for complete freedom. I write fiction anywhere, anytime and about anything; it’s not a job, it’s a joy. There is nothing as completely satisfying as creating a completely satisfying world... completely.

I’ve never had writer’s block. To me, that’s a manufactured term for a phony malady. There’s only writer’s laziness, or writer’s barrenness, or a combination of both. When I observe that I am not writing, I write! If I am unable to write, my mind is telling me that it needs filling up again. Then, I go somewhere or do something different and replenish my mental warehouse, after which, I return to the keyboard and write. It works every time––a simple solution for a natural condition.

If I don’t have the option of physically going somewhere, I get on my computer and go research/traveling to find out about places I’d like to feature in my current or next book. I make notes of specific locales and thoughts of how I want to incorporate them into my work. Then, I go back to the place I left off in my current project and write one scene... just one scene, and see how easily it leads me to my next scene, and to the next––and the next.

Someone asked me the other day how I come up with situations for my characters. I answered, “I don’t. My characters come up with their own situations.” If I know who my character is, and what he (or she) thinks he wants, he’ll do next what he wants to do. I have little to say about it. All I have to do is observe his actions and describe them. This is not to say that I don’t have some sort of loose framework in mind when I begin a project, I do; but it is subject to revision, and often to extreme revision... albeit still a loose outline. The main danger in the tight, rigid outline is production of predictability, which I avoid like a menacing pandemic.

My personal writing rules also apply to conflict. I place two or more characters whom I well know in a place of their misfortune or of their own choosing, and the conflict naturally erupts... or erupts naturally. If my characters don’t conflict, I have not chosen the appropriate personalities to people my story. Thank God, though, that has not happened to me... so far.

And the details... ah, the details. Truman Capote said he believed more in the scissors than in the pencil–––but it takes both, with the computer thrown it as a great codifier of words. At one point in the writing of Peak Experience, and to support Capote’s position, I had little snippets of paper all over every flat surface in my living and dining rooms. These were the loose ends; and every one of them had to be addressed, developed, and resolved before I could rewrite.

Plot difficulties only occur when one forgets important, or even not so important details, so I immerse myself into my plotline and subplots so completely that every nuance is continuously in front of me as I write. It’s a mental foreshadowing and it’s all there, much like the buildup of water in front of a ship’s bow and the wake flowing off to the sides and left behind as I plow into the incidents my characters create. On a re-read, I can easily see what portends from the direction the tale is taking, and I can examine the damages left in the water and on the shore by the waves of the wake. All of the details are addressed and handled before and during my denouement. The only issues potentially left hanging are those that may lead into a sequel; and, paraphrasing Mickey Spillane, the first chapter promotes the novel; the last chapter promotes the next book. The seeds of sequel are sown in several places among the pages of my thriller, Peak Experience: A Novel. I challenge you to find them.

Rewriting? Rewriting is where the polish is applied, and applied, and applied again. Then I put the manuscript away for several months, take it out and reread it, and brush it to a fine shine. But, there are always overlooked mistakes. Therefore, I solicit readers before submitting a manuscript for publishing or even consideration by another set of eyes, and it’s amazing how many little errors are discovered... missing punctuation, extra punctuation, missing words, extra words, misspellings... errors that make me wonder where my mind was when I read my manuscript the thirty-ninth or the fortieth time. If you’re a writer and can afford it, there is no better money spent than for a line-by-line editor.

Sia, you asked, how do I keep my writing fresh? Simple, I pay attention to what is happening worldwide. The old axiom “truth is stranger than fiction” is alive and well, and there is freshness, and putridness, wafting out from the continuous blare of twenty-four hour news. Flipping through my pile of current events magazines and punching among the cable news channels provide all the freshness I need for any given project. Although I may not use the current events per se in my current story, they provide an attitude that informs where my characters direct themselves and what they do. To me, it is important that I reflect the times; and it forever amazes me, that when I write a story, or a section, how prophetic or foreboding it may become. Take for example how my Peak Experience novel parallels the Bernie Madoff scandal, or the recently publicized alleged R. Allen Sanford fraud. The financial atmosphere that produced my novel eventually produced the real life villains. So, I was no prophet... but merely observant of current conditions, and the purveyor of what-ifs.

So, amid all my pronouncements of how and why, I lead a normal life, with two old Jags in the garage and two cats asleep on my desktop as I write. What’s the message here? I am only now beginning to live life as I’ve always envisioned it should be. I do what I want to do when I want to do it. But, fiction writing provides a deeper dimension: I can now create entire worlds that begin and continue and end the way I want them to... and in that there is no greater satisfaction.
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Bud Connell is a media expert. With a background in entertainment and business, he was employed on-the-air by major broadcasting chains, holds some of the highest audience ratings ever recorded, was the programmer/creator of benchmark radio stations and later a consultant to over a hundred broadcasters nationwide. He produced numerous live events and major talent shows, and executive-produced network TV specials.

In 2001, he was inducted into the Media Hall of Fame in St. Louis along with Harry Caray, Jack Buck and Paul Harvey. A dozen years prior, he formed BCTV Productions in Los Angeles and has written, produced and directed hundreds of commercials, films and videos for top corporations, educational and public service organizations. His background also includes a number of writer credits. He was a monthly contributor of articles to a major celebrity magazine, lyricist for more than a thousand jingles––and, as an on-the-air personality, programmer and newsman was the writer of countless news stories, editorials, features, commercials, promotions, comedy bits and presentations. He has written hundreds of video and non-theatrical film scripts, several TV series concepts and radio specials. He's also been widely quoted in books about broadcasting such as Talking Radio by Michael C. Keith.

Bud recently authored Peak Experience, which tied for the Gold in Best in Popular Fiction Category for 2009's 13th annual Independent Publisher Book Awards. Peak Experience is available on Amazon.com, on Amazon’s amazing Kindle, Target.com, and through retailers and distributors nationwide.

He is currently at work on his next novel and a non-fiction book called The Writing of a Debut Novel.

Website:
http://www.myspace.com/authorbudconnell

Friday, July 17, 2009

How To Sprinkle Your Articles With Humor

-John Philipp

"There are very few good judges of humor, and they don't agree." Josh Billings

I've posted several articles on writing humor. One thing most everyone will agree with is that writing humor is hard work. You have to spend a lot of time looking for just the right word or phrase or device to put the sizzle in you writing.

Even then, how do you know others will think what you wrote is funny? Maybe your twisted, little mind is the only one laughing. Professional comedians try out their material over and over again, honing every nuance and inflection. The average writer definitely does not have the time or access to do that.


If you're writing an article that is meant to be humorous, these obstacles come with the territory. But, what if you'd like to add a little humor to a regular fiction or nonfiction piece, and you don't have the time, or the inclination, or your comedy muse is on an extended vacation?

My suggestion is Quote the Experts.

You can add humor to any article with a few well-placed quotes from people who get paid to be funny. A few sources:

  • "The Comedy Thesaurus - 3,241 Quips, Quotes and Smartass Remarks" by Judy Brown organizes these funny lines by category. "


  • Milton Berle's Private Joke File" book does the same, claiming to index over 10,000 items. I didn't count them myself, but I'm sure Uncle Miltie wouldn't exaggerate.


  • The Internet is a bottomless pit of guffaws. To mention just a few: Jokes 2 Go.com has some funny lists sorted by category and Mike Durett's About.com Guide to Humor has a list of humor categories.


What I do when I need a funny quote is I type in the key words of the topic plus "humor" and hit the Google button. That usually gets me what I want. For example, I recently Googled for a quote about American politics and came up with a line by Ronald Reagan, "The nine most terrifying words in the English language are: 'I'm from the government and I'm here to help.'"


I'll mention three places this can work for you. The first is at the beginning of your piece (as I did in this article) and starts you off on a good note.

A second place is in the middle, particularly using a quote about a key word in your topic such as, "Now I want to talk about computer programming, which, as Ron Heuse once said, "is a lot like sex. One mistake and you could have to support it the rest of your life."


The third place to use humorous quotes is (bet you guessed this) at the end. It can be a good way to summarize your message and leave the reader remembering your piece with a smile. And, so saying, I leave you with James Thurber's line, "Humor is emotional chaos remembered in tranquility."


By the way, when you're trolling the Internet for humor, I'd like to point out that Anonymous was a pen name I used to use. I don't need that anymore, so I'd appreciate it, if you use one of my quips, you use my real name.

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John Philipp is a weekly humor columnist for four Marin County, California newspapers and has won numerous humor and memoir writing awards. His humor columns are posted at http://johnphilipphumor.gather.com/.
His wisdom (with Phil Prank's cartoons) is posted at Thought~Bytes
http://thoughtbytes.gather.com/


I thought I'd share one of John's Thought~Bytes with you. You can find them on Gather.com at the link provided above. John publishes them every Wednesday.

Wednesday, July 15, 2009

W Is For Writing And Structure

My guest today is author Lane Robins, also known as Lyn Benedict (Sins & Shadows). I like her writing style and from what I've read of her, I love the details she is able to weave into her stories so smoothly.


Her topic today is on how to keep control of a story, both in character arcs and plot lines. Especially with deadlines looming. I've seen all sorts of visuals and story building devices to keep everything straight. Her visual is an intriguing concept.

Writing is the best job ever. It gives you the opportunity to create worlds, characters, plots. You get to play with magic, religion, history. Best of all, you get to play with the office supplies.

Call me irrevocably warped by long afternoons in my father's office, but I adore office supplies. As a writer, I get to use them whenever I want. However I want.

Every writer has their own process to creating a novel; mine involves a rainbow of sticky-notes and posterboard.

For me, novel genesis goes something like this:

I clear off the table, or at least half of it. I lay out a piece of foam core, posterboard, sheet of cardboard. I take the cats off of it. Repeatedly. Then I draw a giant W with a black permanent marker.

Most novels have reader expectations built into their frames—genre novels have perhaps more than most. In romance, someone will live happily ever after. In mystery, people will commit crimes and get caught. In fantasy, people will discover how magic can reshape the world. But all of these require twists and turns within the plot, points where the characters react and move in a different direction. The giant W makes me start with those major scenes that drive the plot forward.

So I've got a W, I've got the barest ideas of a plot, I've got a character waiting for conflict, and by god, I've got sticky-notes in scads of colors and shapes.

I start with the first point of the W: the inciting incident, where the story begins. In Kings & Assassins, that's the death of the king. It gets two notes stuck to it, one reads something pithy along the lines of Kill King Aris. The second note, a separate color, represents the main character's emotional track. I find it extraordinarily helpful to attach the character's emotional reaction to each event; it keeps me from forgetting that the characters need to feel. It's always a temptation for me to just move the characters around like little pawns, but that not only makes for an ultimately unsatisfying read, but bores me stiff while I'm writing the novel.

The second point is the first complication that spins out from that inciting incident. It always makes things worse/harder/more unpleasant for the main character. Again, it gets two post-its at a minimum. (The more complicated the story, or the more crowded the character list, the more post-its accumulate until some storyboards look like mosaics. Pretty, but a little daunting.)

The third point, the half-way point of the book is usually a new twist, a new complication, something out of left field for the character who thought they were getting a handle on the first set of problems. Also known as the "things get worse" point. Very often my brain provides a silly little dum-dum-DUM! at this moment as I stick the note on.

The fourth point: oh the fourth point is dreaded. It's the spot in the story that's always blankest to me when I'm brainstorming. I know it's the spot reserved for the character's dark night of the soul, the moment where they have doubts, feel fears, where their plans have failed, where life is bleak and bitter and probably looking like it's going to be cut brutally short. Sadly, I rarely know this point in advance—I guess my brain just likes to leave some mystery in the plot. It usually gets a place holder sticky with a few question marked ideas written on it. It may, however, have a very elaborate emotional arc lined out. After all, I know what my character dreads and fears, and I want him to feel it right there.

After that, it's a steady climb upward, the uphill battle leading to the climactic fifth point of the W, where my long-suffering character can finally triumph, though often at a steep price.

All writers are sadists. I personally blame the writing advice books which tell you to never make things easy for your protagonist, and to kill your darlings. The second advice is really about favorite scenes that don't add much, lines that are out of place, or anything that we put in that we love, but doesn't fit the rest of the story. Thing is, we're writers. We home in on "kill" and the characters suffer for it.

This is a picture of a bare bones W with the beginnings of a post-it note party that I’m putting together so I can write a narrative outline for an upcoming novel. You'll see that there are more than five points represented. The joy of the W is that it allows me to start filling in events along the lines to move my character from point to point in a driven way.



You can faintly see the black sharpie lines of the W beneath the post-its, as well as a scattering of brain food of choice (Peanut m & ms), my beloved and increasingly battered Mac, and a few post-it notes that haven't quite migrated up to the board but belong there. Eventually.


This is a single POV character arc. For multiple POVs, but only one main character—like Kings & Assassins, like Maledicte—the sticky-notes get more numerous, but the W stays static. Occasionally, an antagonist will get enough back story going that I might start a line down the side charting their past, their present, their desired future.

I've got another posterboard going for a more complicated book, a fantasy romance with two main characters whose plots will weave in and out of each others', and for that, I've put up a double W that overlaps. It's definitely ugly and crowded and makes no sense at all to the casual viewer. But to me? It's a road map to another world built out of ordinary office supplies.

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Lane Robins was born in Miami, Florida, the daughter of two scientists, and grew up as the first human member of their menagerie. When it came time for a career, it was a hard choice between veterinarian and writer. It turned out to be far more fun to write about blood than to work with it. She has three books out currently, Maledicte, Kings & Assassins, and, writing as Lyn Benedict, Sins & Shadows. She currently lives in Kansas, with an ever-fluctuating number of dogs and cats. You can reach her at lanerobins.com Lane can also be found on Facebook.

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Monday, July 13, 2009

A Writer’s (Evolving) Schedule

It’s always a special treat for me to feature authors I also love to read. Carly Phillips is one such writer and my guest today. I’ve been reading Carly’s books long before she began writing single titles. One day, I had nothing to read so popped over to my sister’s house to raid her book stash (we tend to do this with each other’s books) and picked up two books she said were good. They were Perfect Partners and Brazen.





I liked the way the author made me laugh and her characters. That hasn’t changed over the years. I recently finished Lucky Charm. Loved Gabby—my kind of woman—and Derek. I’m now reading Lucky Streak and can I just say…Mike…yum.



Carly’s topic today is something writers can relate to, scheduling writing time, dealing with distractions of every day life, as well as the way we deal with changes.



I'm often asked what’s the best part about being a writer? Easy answer. Making my own schedule. What’s the worst part? Also making my own schedule. As a stay at home mom with two girls (now 17 and 13), I’ve learned to be adaptable. I started to write when my first daughter was just one. I needed to learn to write when she napped or occupied herself (hah!). Luckily, I’ve always been a person who needed background noise to write. In High School, later college and law school, radio or TV would keep me company. In fact, silence is too noisy for me! Over the years, I kept up quite the writing pace – at times – 4 Harlequin Temptations a year. I must have written through many distractions!

When I started writing single title romances, starting with The Bachelor, the length and different complexity brought me to two books a year. Although this was still the word count equivalent to the four Temptations. But I definitely started to slow down. Hit more blocks. I used to think that when the newness of the career wore off, sometimes it became more like work than love. But then I’d realize no matter how hard the stories were to write, I still loved what I do. But I found myself in a new pattern – writing less in the beginning of a deadline, scrambling more towards the end. I realize now this isn’t so much a function of laziness or wasting time (OK well there is SOME of that) but beginnings are more difficult for me than middles and endings.

In the beginning, I’m establishing character, motivation, conflict and story. I often find myself going back and weaving in something big that should have been there all along. For awhile this was frustrating. I thought it was because I didn’t preplan enough. But as the Plotmonkey Group evolved (we go away as a group 2 times a year to plot), I WAS getting the preplotting work and still struggling through beginnings. So I now accept, this is my process. The beginning is slow and requires reworking and revising a lot; and the middle and ends go much faster.

With this new process, I needed a new schedule. I could no longer rely on “writing when I can.” It’s funny. I thought when my kids got older, I’d write more. Instead I found myself writing less. That’s when I realized something had to change. And it did.

USA Today Bestselling Author Janelle Denison is my critique partner and friend. We talk for hours every day. She lives in Oregon, I live in NY. We both have girls the same age. And we both hit the same scheduling issues at the same time. We decided to try something: We “meet” online (via AIM) at 9 AM EST; 6 PM PST (yes this requires more dedication on her end as she has to wake up very early!) – we say hi on AIM (Instant Messenger). Janelle sets the alarm for 30 minutes, and we write straight through. When the time is up, she IM’s and asks if I’m up for 30 more. We do this for an hour – an hour and a half. I no longer book 9 AM doctor or hair appointments. I try to ignore (thanks to Caller ID) calls that can wait. When possible, nothing else happens until I’m finished at 10:30/11:00 AM. Yes, occasionally life gets in the way. Pages don’t happen. But I always pick up and start over the next day at 9 AM.

We’ve been at this since March. When I started I was on page 80 and now I’m on 250. I will meet my deadline, yes with a rush towards the end, but my goal for the next book is to start with this scheduling and write daily. If I keep it up, I may turn in a book early (as opposed to just on time) for the first time in years. And I may end up relaxed throughout the process.

One can always hope!

The point in sharing this is to tell you that life isn’t static. It’s chaos and change. The days when I used to plan an entire day to write, one of the kids would get sick. When I had only a spare hour, I’d crank out pages. Over time, not only did I need to adapt but also I needed more routine. For now, I have that. I’m sure over time, this schedule will need to morph into something different, as my life’s needs change. But having seen the value in daily writing – it comes faster; easier; more consistent flow – I want to continue.

So if you’re not writing the way you’d like, take a look at your life and your schedule. See where you can make changes and PROTECT THE WORK (rumor has it this phrase comes from Nora – not surprising – and I thank her for it!). If you don’t mark your work time as sacred, no one else will!
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A few extra things about Carly:

How did you get started as a writer?

Sometimes I wonder myself! I never planned on becoming a writer, let alone a romance writer. I was a lawyer who loved law school but hated practicing law. Not a great combination let me tell you! My parents always said I could be a perpetual student and they are probably right. But I loved reading romance when my first daughter was small. I began to notice that many of the hardcover authors got their start at Harlequin or Silhouette. Eventually I got an idea that wouldn't go away—I wanted to write for them too! Seven years and ten completed manuscripts later, I sold my first book, Brazen, to Harlequin Temptation.

Where do you work?

I have an office right off my bedroom. A separate room from my room that isn't on top of the kids and yet is right in the center of things. I'm always around when they need me and they come in here to do homework. I recently bought a recliner, an idea given to me by Vicki Lewis Thompson, who suggested I use it as my place to write with my Alphasmart on my lap. Unfortunately I use it to nap, instead. I’ve also learned that if I write too often on the laptop, I end up with back pain, arm pain, and in physical therapy.

Favorite way to waste a day ...
Shopping, soap opera watching in the afternoon with the dogs at my side, hanging with my girls and my mom!


Biggest vice ... Buying makeup and handbags—it's embarrassing the amount I own!

Want to learn more about Carly, fun facts, her books, and pictures? Stop by and vistit her wonderful website: http://www.carlyphillips.com/

Carly Phillips started her writing career with the Harlequin Temptation line in 1999 with Brazen and she's never strayed far from home! Carly has since published more than 15 books and hit the New York Times bestseller list with her famous "Reading with Ripa" pick, the first romance ever chosen for a nationally televised book club, The Bachelor, and its sequel, The Playboy.
Carly lives in Purchase, New York, with her husband, two daughters and frisky soft-coated Wheaten terrier, who acts like their third child. When she's not spending time with her family, Carly is busy writing, promoting and playing online! To learn more about this quickly rising star of romance,
http://www.carlyphillips.com/

Friday, July 10, 2009

How To Write Humor--Using Humor Devices Part III

-John Philipp

In a previous article, we discussed Stealing From The Barry Best (July 3rd) But you don't have to steal the joke itself, you can steal the device, the method used by the writer to achieve a desired effect.

When you read humor you should not only enjoy the joke but observe the devices an author uses to achieve his effect.

Here are some examples of humor devices you may be able to use in some article somewhere. (All examples are by Dave Barry unless otherwise noted)

  • Make up Absurd Holidays: Dave Barry uses this device all the time to exaggerate a point e.g. "Of course, congress will be unavailable as they will be celebrating National Peat Bog Awareness Month."

  • Describe a bad trait of a character, then use a word such as "yet" to indicate you are going to balance this with a good aspect and, instead, describe another bad trait e.g. "(He is) an abrasive mayor who really gets on some people's nerves, yet at the same time strikes other people as a jerk."

  • Describe an experience with an absurd analogy e.g. "As an emotional experience, it ranks right behind having a gallstone operation, without anesthetic, performed in a blizzard on the top of a 100-foot tower erected at the North Pole." Jon Carroll

  • Use a real name to thinly disguise another real name e.g. "…a large organization that, out of respect for its privacy, I will refer to as "The Episcopal Church" (not its real name). Even though The Episcopal Church pretty much runs Utah, it's trying to keep a low profile during the Olympics."

  • Use a descriptor to describe an item and then misuse the same descriptor in a humorous way e.g."…to watch the men's 90-meter ski jump, which gets its name from the fact that a sane person would have to drink a 90-meter-high glass of gin before he would even consider attempting this sport."

  • Play "blame the editor e.g."…who have since become the most famous Canadians in world history, surpassing even (EDITOR: Please insert names of some famous Canadians here)."

Another favorite device of Dave Barry's, for those of you who like word puzzles, is to jumble letters in a proper name of person or place e.g. "The letters in 'Marie-Reine Le Gougne' can be rearranged to spell "An eerie groin legume."

  • Make a purposeful error, then correct it e.g. "How a Bill Becomes a Law-First the bill secretes a substance that it uses to form a cocoon, and then it … No, sorry. That's how a caterpillar becomes a butterfly. The way a bill becomes a law is: . . ."

  • Split words into syllables to make up a funny definition e.g. the word aerobics comes from two Greek words: aero, meaning "ability to," and bics, meaning "withstand tremendous boredom."

  • Use the phrase "which, for want of a better term I will call (the obvious)" e.g. "From time to time I receive letters from a certain group of individuals that I will describe, for want of a better term, as 'women'."

Footnotes can also be used as a humor device:
For example, the device I call 'none of your business with a titillating footnote' e.g. "which is truly one of the most fascinating episodes in American history, although it is quite frankly none of your business (1). (Below Barry footnotes: "1) Especially the part about the dwarf goat.")

Then there is always the condescending footnote: "If there's one thing Americans love, it's satire." The footnote reads: "For an example of satire, reread this sentence."

I'll end with one of my Dave Barry favorites. You figure out the device. "There are two major schools of thought on how to pack for traveling. These are known technically as "my school" and "my wife's school."

Now you need some humorous articles on which to try out your new humor observation skills.
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John Philipp is a weekly humor columnist for four Marin County, California newspapers and has won numerous humor and memoir writing awards. His humor columns are posted at http://johnphilipphumor.gather.com/.His wisdom (with Phil Frank's cartoons) is posted at Thought~Bytes http://thoughtbytes.gather.com/

Tuesday, July 7, 2009

A Writer’s Life Is Never Dull, Especially with a Global Romance Market

My guest today, is the wonderful Annie West. I'm so glad to have her again on my blog. I asked Annie West if she would explain a bit about the global market as an author for Harlequin.

I remember reading many more Harlequins when I was younger and Presents, at the time, were my favorite of the Harlequin line. The thing I enjoyed the most was reading books by authors not from the United States. I loved the expressions native to their country, the scenery, the way they used the English language.

I'll admit I was in love with all things Australian—so much so that I visited and actually considered moving there. Then love got in the way. I read many Australian authors, not just Harlequin. It's a wonderful country and like ours, there is so much variety in people, landscape and in its vastness.

Annie shares what it’s like to have her books released to various foreign markets.



There are several distinct sides to my writing life. There’s Annie as hermit, head in the clouds and fingers on the computer keys, typing in the new story. We’re all familiar with that one, right? That’s what writers do – they write.

Well, yes, but they do other things too. Like right now. Even as I type I’m itching to revisit my draft manuscript as my crit partner has raised some issues about it and I want to check out the details. Can I really shorten that first chapter? How on earth am I going to work the change I need in the second half? I’m torn…I want to write this (and since Sia was kind enough to provide a date to post my ramblings, I have to deliver) but part of me wants to get on with the book.

I’ve discovered in the 3½ half years I’ve been writing for Harlequin that spreading yourself between multiple tasks is part and parcel of what writers do. On an average week I’ll have the book to write, a blog or two to prepare or an article to research, sites I want to visit, maybe proof copies of my previous book to check, a little work to critique for someone else, prizes to send out, promo to do, a competition to read for, research that may require contacting some experts or researching on the net or in a library, sundry queries to answer (the ones from my editor get priority) and maybe notes to jot down on the next story brewing in my head. In between that, if there’s time, I do like to read as well, and spend a little time with my family. As I still have a day job life can get very busy.

But life gets even more interesting when you write for a global market.

One of the joys of writing for Harlequin is finding out that your books are bought and read all over the globe, from the English language markets of the USA, Britain, Australia, New Zealand and Canada to South Africa, the Philippines and India.

Then there are the translations. I found out the other day quite by chance that I have two books out in Brazil, with very hot covers indeed. I recently received a translation into Polish, another into Czech (complete with name change – in Czech I’m Annie Westova), as well as Russian, Greek, French, Korean, Japanese (including a manga comic book edition) and numerous others.

Wow! I sit in my home in Australia and am stunned by how far my stories travel. Most of the time I have no idea which book has been translated or when. I find out when a foreign edition lobs into my post box.

But writing for readers who don’t necessarily share the same cultural background can be interesting too. I still find it fascinating that so many readers find Aussie heroes hot! Well, yes they are, but to me they’re not exotic at all.

There are Issues of language. I tend to stick to Aussie English which is almost the same as British English, so if you see ‘colour’ instead of ‘color’ or ‘grey’ instead of ‘gray’ in my books and you’re used to US English, they’re not typos, that’s just the way we spell.

There decisions on what phrases to use. In a recent book I described something as ‘big as Uluru’. I could have used another simile (as big as the Empire State Building, or the Eiffel Tower) but as my character is Australian I figured I could be excused from using something typically Aussie. By contrast, in a book later this year, where the heroine is half Greek, half Australian, she describes something as being ‘as rare as snow on Santorini’, since she knows Greece well. I like to use some Australian phrases if I have an Aussie character, but I’m always conscious of the fact that a lot of readers won’t understand a really local phrase. I aim to make the story understandable to as many as possible.

I don’t have much swearing in my books, but are times when a hero has been so upset by something he’s exclaimed with frustration, fury or fear. Times when ‘oh, bother’ just doesn’t ring true. At such times my heroes have been known to curse, rather mildly. But not all readers appreciate the use of certain phrases. What characters can get away with in Australia may not be so acceptable elsewhere. It can exercise the mind, finding ways for them to express their feelings in a way readers will relate to.

When you write for a global market your readers, fellow authors, reviewers, staff from your publishing house etc, are bound to be awake when you’re not. My editor is in London and we have a 9 hour time difference. That means we have to tee up discussions, not just pick up the phone when we feel like it. I recently worked on a project with writers in three different time zones so it was rare to get answers to questions straight away. Often they arrived in my inbox when I was sleeping.

When I’m following a blog that’s based on US time, I have to stay up late to talk to people as they wake in the morning, and then get up very early to chat with others at the end of their day. Public holidays are completely different too which means some questions go unanswered when you least expect it.

Then there are release dates. I thought when I was published I’d see my books on the shelves and that would be when my book was ‘out’. End of story. But no. Different continents get different release dates. Forget the foreign translations, just the English language editions are enough to make my head spin.

April saw ‘The Desert King’s Pregnant Bride’ on sale in North America. In June ‘The Greek’s Convenient Mistress’ was released in the US. But this was my 2nd book out of 10 so far. It was on sale in the UK and Australia ages ago but the schedules across continents don’t always match. Meanwhile I was trying to promote my May UK release ‘Blackmailed Bride, Innocent Wife’, which is also out in June in Aus/NZ (at the same time as my Greek title in North America). Then in August my ‘Savakis Mistress’ is released in the UK (but actually it appears in July because they’ve changed the release schedule) and in August in Aus/NZ. I don’t know when that book will be released in North America and I’m already fielding queries from American readers on that one. Meanwhile August sees a re-release in the UK of my first book for Harlequin, but in an anthology, which naturally has a different title. In December ‘Blackmailed Bride, Innocent Wife’ makes it to North America and the following month a brand new title in the UK, and so it goes on.

Working out what book to promote when is a challenge, especially as they’re available on the web before they’re in bookstores, and even earlier to readers who subscribe to Harlequin. Australian—so

I adore writing for a global market and knowing people all around the world have an opportunity to discover my stories. But staying organised is a massive challenge. Thank goodness for my wall planner reminding me what I have to do next. And my diary. And those post it notes and scrawled messages…

Cheers,
Annie
Aussie author Annie West is a bestselling author for Harlequin Presents/Modern/Sexy (depending on which country you’re in). She gets a kick out of going to Australian writer and reader conferences where she gets described as ‘a Sexy author’! She’s won and been shortlisted for several reader awards and is just about to start work on what she hopes will be her 11th book for Harlequin. Annie loves her work, spending days fantasising about gorgeous men and their love lives. It’s a hard job but she has no regrets. Annie lives with her family on the east coast of Australia between the Hunter Valley’s world class wine country and some of the state’s best beaches.

Annie’s current releases are THE GREEK’S CONVENIENT MISTRESS (Harlequin Presents in North America), plus BLACKMAILED BRIDE, INNOCENT WIFE (June in Australia/New Zealand and December in North America). You can read excerpts of her books or enter contests to win new releases on her website.
http://www.annie-west.com

Monday, July 6, 2009

IN MY ROOM

“There’s a world where I can go and tell my secrets to In my room…”


My guest today is Rita Award nominee, Nicola Cornick. She not only writes Historical Romances, but has fabulous inspiration working for National Trust Ashdown House, a former Tudor hunting lodge, located in Berkshire. Of course, we Americans picture a hunting lodge as much more rustic than the reality of the Dutch styled mansion with a hundred steps


Nicola shares some pictures and some thoughts on finding our special place to write.



Yes, the Beach Boys had it right. It’s the place where I do my dreaming and my scheming when I’m plotting out my books and developing my characters. Then inevitably I do my crying and my sighing when I’m approaching a deadline and the book stubbornly refuses to write, or my characters go off in a direction very different from the one I had planned. So My Room is a very special place.

I imagine we all have “Our Room” where we write or read, or a place that is special to us, indoors or out. It’s a place that inspires us or a place we visit to do our dreaming. Until last year “my room” actually doubled up as the kitchen as well. This was a minor detail – the fact that the rest of the family used it for cooking, eating, chatting and dropping their stuff everywhere was slightly irritating at times but space issues mean that a lot of us have to write when and where we can and I was no exception.

Then, at the beginning of last year, I got my own room. It’s beautiful and I love it. It’s now been colonised by the cats as well, but hey, we all have to share sometimes. So I thought I would walk you around it and tell you about a few of the things that provide inspiration and feed my writing dreams.

Well, first of all there are my bookshelves. When I put them in I thought there would be masses of space on them. But somehow my books have expanded to fit the shelves available. These are my research books, mainly for the Regency period, but some other historical non-fiction as well. I’ve had an absolute ball collecting my reference books and I add to them all the time. One of these days those shelves will go straight through the floor because they are groaning under the weight of so many books! Research is one of the things that I love about being a historical author. I grab a book from the shelves, intending to look up something specific, and I read some other fascinating snippet and off I go at a tangent… I get some of my best story ideas that way. I remember once I was researching shopping in the Regency period and I saw a reference to lottery tickets and that gave me an idea for an entire book! There is everything on these shelves from the history of beards to the history of belly dancing.

On the wall to the left of my desk is a framed poster of the cover of my first single title historical, Deceived. I did my first book signing at the RWA Conference in Atlanta a few years ago and they let me keep the poster as a souvenir. My husband had it framed for me to celebrate the publication of my first book for HQN. It’s enormous and one night it fell off the wall with a huge crash and almost squashed the cat who used up one of her nine lives. The poster is a wonderful reminder of how lucky and privileged I feel to be writing Regency historicals for HQN but it’s also a bit daunting. On those days when I sit at my laptop and absolutely no ideas come and every word feels as though it’s been weighted with lead I see the big book cover and think: “I’m an impostor!” A lot of people tell me that they feel like that about their jobs sometimes; those moments when we all question whether we really know what we are doing. The moments that you hope doctors and pilots don’t have. With writing the whole process seems so reliant on nothing more tangible than intuition and imagination sometimes. Jo Beverley recently called the writing process “alchemy” and there is something magical and mysterious about it. Sure, there is craft and skill and structure, lots of hard work and many other components, but in my experience writing is also taking risks and going with what feel right – oh, and a large dose of luck, of being in the right place at the right time with the right book.

On the other wall is a black and white photograph of the gardens at Ashdown House. Like a lot of people I wear two hats – I write and I also work for the National Trust for England and Wales, showing visitors around an historic house. Ashdown is another of my passions, a stunningly beautiful seventeenth century hunting lodge that provides me with a great deal of inspiration. Simply walking up the magnificent oak staircase makes me feel as though I have been transported back in time. On a more practical note, working at Ashdown also gets me out of the house and meeting real people. Being a writer is a wonderful job but I also find it quite a lonely one sometimes. Talking to people, listening to them, answering questions about Ashdown and simply getting out and about is another great way for me to find story ideas.

On my desk is a peacock feather quill pen to remind me that I am a writer of racy Regency historicals. The peacock quill pen recently featured in a very hot and sexy short story I wrote for Harlequin! Well hey, sometimes you need to remind yourself that you write hot books when you also have to taken the rubbish out, hang up the washing, go to buy groceries…

Finally there is the view from my window. Strictly speaking it’s not in my room but it is very inspiring as well as distracting (all those comings and goings in the street outside!) Concentration and self-discipline can be a big issue for me as a writer! But it’s also lovely to have the countryside on my doorstep. When I’m wrestling with my plot and can’t make any headway I’ll go out and walk the dog, hoping that exercise and fresh air will help. Usually I can walk off the writer’s block.

I hope you have enjoyed this peek into my room. Do you have a special place you go to read or write? Where do you gain ideas and inspiration? What are the mementoes that you keep about you to remind you of the things that are important in your life?

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Nicola Cornick studied history at London University and Ruskin College, Oxford, where she wrote her dissertation on heroes and hero myths. It was a tough subject but clearly someone had to tackle it and Nicola took it so seriously that she passed with distinction. She has a “dual life” as a writer of Regency historicals for Harlequin HQN Books and a historian working for the National Trust. A double nominee for both the Romance Writers of America RITA award and the UK Romantic Novelists’ Association Romance Prize, Nicola has been described by Publisher’s Weekly as “a rising star of the Regency genre.” Her Regency trilogy “The Brides of Fortune” is available now and there is an excerpt on her website at: http://www.nicolacornick.co.uk/extract-the_undoing_of_a_lady.htm